书面表达评分标准“最高档”要求：“应用了较多的语法构造或词汇；语法构造或词汇方面有少许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂构造或较高级词汇所致；有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文构造紧凑。”从历年书面表达高分文章来看，每篇文章都有“亮”点，即在用词、造句或段落安排上都有独到之处。
要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的根底上写出自己的特色，写出自己的“亮”点。
在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。
1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。
A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street. B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street. 分析:is in是常见词语，而situates in那么是《大纲》上没有的，属于高级词汇。
2)在周末我们做很多作业。
A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do. B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.
分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of，而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。
3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。
A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.
B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.
在表达要点时，B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强，也显得生动。
在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一个，也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。
在造句时,既要使句子生动，又要使其简明扼要。
1、使用与人不同的表达方式，特别是提倡打破汉语句子构造的束缚而重组的句子更受欢送。
1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。
A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.
B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.
大多数使用了there be构造，这是对的，但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”构造，且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇，更是难能可贵的。 2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。
A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)
B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)
2.使用一些强势句式，如强调句、感慨句、倒装句等，增强语句的表现力。如： 3)阿福救了我妹妹。
A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)
B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)
4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是快乐。
A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)
B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感慨句)
3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应防止使用相同长度的相同句型，而应注意句式的变化，如长短句结合，简单句、并列句与复合句共用，还可使用简化句等；一些较复杂的构造如独立主格，分词构造等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多，而且多处使用there be构造，显得单调、乏味，而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。
5)这是一套25平方米的住房，住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房；卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。
A: It's a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.
B: It's a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.
在写作中，我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点，同时为使主题突出,构造严谨，我们应注意和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上，xx高考堪称典范。请看： Opinions are pided on the question.
60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy
themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will bee necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.
On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.
1)该文使用Opinions are pided...作交代句，开门见山，随后两个段落均使用了主题句(见黑体字局部)，使全文构造紧凑，表达严谨。
2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整，如“40%的同学认为应收门票，但不宜过高。”前局部作为主题句放在句首，而后局部另起一句放在句末：They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急，主题突出，条理清楚。
3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词，在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的)，这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系，使文章表达连贯，浑然一体。
4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节，这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。
总之，要想使自己的文章有亮点，吸引读者，在考试中获得高分，就应在用词、造句、谋篇上下功夫，哪怕是有一处特长都是“亮”点，都是值得肯定的。
1.First of all ,Secondly，What's more, Next, Meanwhile, Besides
首先，其次，此外，下一步，同时，另外（列数观点短语） 2.On the one hand, On the other hand 一方面，另一方面 3.Aents， 强调的是
4.Nevertheless， 尽管如此 5.To be exact 准确地说 6.To be sure, 当然
7.To begin with, 首先，
8.As for sth,
9.That is the reason why, 这就是为， 10.In general,
一般而言，
11.Namely=That is to say 也就是说，
12.As the saying goes，=The saying goes like that 有句谚语这样说的 13.Admittedly 诚然，
14.Similarly, 同样的，
15.First and foremost, 首要的， 16.After all, 毕竟， 17.In brief, 简要地
试题要求考生根据所给的情景和要求写一篇书面材料。但它并非按照“提示”逐句翻译，而是要求考生在充分领会“提示”的前提下，用自己的语言组织成一篇内容充实、语言正确、句子连贯、用词贴切的作文。据统计，近几年上海和全国英语高考卷中的写作，主要是关于记人、叙事、写信和通知或看图作文等内容的记叙文、议论文和应用文。
记叙文要求考生根据试卷中提供的情景，组织语言材料，编写成文。一般说来记叙文有时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果六要素，写作时要明白清楚地给予表达。记人时，要注意介绍人物的
身世、经历和事迹等。叙事时要描写事情发生与开展的过程，表达事情发生的前因后果等。
议论文要求考生就某一方面的问题通过摆事实、讲道理的方式来发表自己看法。一般说来议论文文由论点、论据、论证三局部构成。要做到：1、论点正确无误。2、论据可靠充分。论据可以是人们公认的真理，也可以是经过实践考证的经典著作。3、论证合理严密。人们常用的论证方法有归纳法、推理法、比照法。议论文一般按提出问题、分析问题、解决问题的逻辑顺序来安排层次。 英语应用文主要以写信为主。英文书信由6个局部组成。它们是信头、信内地址、称呼、正文、完毕语、签字。格式一定要正确。信的正文和写文章一样，要分段写，每一段有一个中心思想。 无论是记叙文、议论文还是应用文，在详细写作过程中我们不妨按如下顺序进展。
首先，确定写作中心。根据这个中心，能够扩展的材料有哪些。要防止写那些与中心内容无关紧要的细节。
其次，围绕中心，列出写作提纲。提纲一定要包含所提供的情景要点，同时要尽量使用自己熟悉的词汇与句型。
第三、根据字数多少，扩展成篇。扩展的内容一定要紧扣主题，千万不要写那些与主题不相关的内容。扩展时要注意短文的字数，要写够100个词语，以防止由于字数不够引起的扣分。 高考英语作文超实用高分必备议论文万能模板
Some people believe (argue, recognize, think) that 观点1. But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that 观点2.
As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea. There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all, 论据1. More importantly, 论据2. Most important of all, 论据3. In summary, 总结观点. As a college student, I am
supposed to 表决心. 或 From above, we can predict that 预测. People hold different views about X. Some people are of the opinion that 观点1,while others point out that 观点2. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.For one thing, 论据1. For another, 论据2. Last but not the least, 论据3.
To conclude, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心. 或 From above, we can predict that 预测. There is no consensus of opinions among people about X（争论的焦点）. Some people are of the view that 观点1, while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 观点2.
As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses. The reasons are obvious. First of all, 论据1. Furthermore, 论据2. Among all of the
supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is, 论据3. A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心. 或 From above, we can predict that 预测.
introducing a friend to another friend 介绍一个朋友给另一个
你的朋友魏东获得了一笔到美国留学一年的奖学金。他去的那所学校碰巧有你一位好朋友Dick。你写信把魏东介绍给Dick，希望他能帮助、照顾魏东，愿他们也成为好朋友。 Dear Dick，
One of my best friends Wei Dong has just won a scholarship to study for one year in the United States. He’ll be leaving soon, and, believe it or not, he will be in the same school with you. I have told him a lot about you and he will go to see you right after his arrival. Since he is new there, I hope you could do whatever you can to help him begin a new life.
Wei Dong is a handsome tall boy of 18. He is a diligent student as well as a good guy to get along with. Besides his study, he has a wide range of interests, such as country music and basketball. I hope you can learn from each other and bee good friends. Best wishes. 亲的迪克，
我最好的朋友之一魏东刚刚赢得了一笔到美国留学一年的奖学金。他很快就要走了，而且，不管你信不信，他会跟你在同一所学校。我已经告诉过他很多关于你和他他到了之后会见到你。因为他是新生，我希望你能尽你所能帮助他开始新的。
魏东是一个高大英俊的18岁的男孩。他是一个勤奋的且和人很好相处的学生。除了他的学习，他兴趣广泛，如乡村音乐和篮球。我希望你们可以互相学习，成为好朋友。
最好的祝福。
51. There is a general debate on the campus today over the phenomenon of college or high school students' doing a part-time job.
对于大学或高中生打工这一现象，里进展着广泛的争论。 52. By taking a major-related part-job，students can not only improve their academic studies，but gain much experience，experience they will never be able to get from the textbooks.
通过做一份和相关的工作，学生不仅能够提高他们的专业能力，而且能获得从课本上得不到的经历。
53. Although people’s lives have been dramatically changed over the last decades，it must be admitted that，shortage of funds is still the one of the biggest questions that students nowadays have to face because that tuition fees and prices of books are soaring by the day.
近几十年，尽管人们的生活有了惊人的改变，但必须成认，由于学费和书费日益飞涨，资金短缺仍然是学生们面临的最大问题之一。
54. Consequently，the extra money obtained from part-time job will strongly support students to continue to their study life.
因此，业余工作挣来的钱将强有力地支持学生们继续他们的求学生活。
55. From what has been discussed above，we may safely draw a conclusion that part-time job can produce a far-reaching impact on students and they should be encouraged to take part-time job，which will benefit students and their family，even the society as a whole.
通过上面的讨论，我们不难得出结论：业余工作对学生们会产生深远的影响，我们应鼓励学生从事业余工作，这将有利于学生和他们的家庭，甚至整个社会。
56. These days，people in growing numbers are beginning to plain that work is more stressful and less leisurely than in past. Many experts point out that，along with the development of modern society，it is an inevitable result and there is no way to avoid it.
现在，越来越多的人们开始抱怨工作比以前更有压力。许多专家指出这是现代社会开展必然的结果，无法防止。
57. It is widely acknowledged that puter and other machines have bee an indispensable part of our society，which make our life and work more fortable and less laborious.
人们普遍认为计算机和机器已经成为我们社会必不可少的一局部。 它们使我们的生活更舒适，减少了大量劳动。
58. At the same time，along with the benefits of such machines，employees must study knowledge involved in such machines so that they are able to control them.
同时，随着这些机器带给我们的好处，员工们也必须要学习与之相关的知识以便使用它们。
59. No one can deny the basic fact that it is impossible for average workers to master those high-technology skills easily.
没有人能否认这一根本领实：对于一般工人来讲，轻松掌握这些技术是不可能的。
60. In the second place，there seem to be too many people without job and not enough job position.
第二方面，失业的人似乎太多而又没有足够的工作岗位。 61. Millions of people have to spend more time and energy on studying new skills and technology so that they can keep a favorable position in job market.
成千上万的人们不得不花费更多的精力和时间学习新的技术和知识，使得他们在就业市场能保持优势。
62. Aording to a recent survey，a growing number of people express a strong desire to take another job or spend more time on their job in order to get more money to support their family.
根据最近的一项调查，越来越多的人表达了想从事另外的工作或加班以赚取更多的钱来补贴家用的强烈愿望。
63. From what has been discussed above，I am fully convinced that the leisure life-style is undergoing a decline with the progress of modern society，it is not necessary a bad thing.
通过以上讨论，我完全相信，随着现代社会的进步，幽闲的生活方式正在消失并不是件坏事。
64. The problem of international tourism has caused wide public concern over the recent years. 近些年，国际的问题引起了广泛关注。
65. Many people believe that international tourism produce positive effects on economic growth and local government should be encouraged to promote international tourism.
许多人认为国际旅游对经济开展有积极作用，应鼓励地方政府开展国际旅游。
66. But what these people fail to see is that international tourism may bring about a disastrous impact on our environment and local history.
但是这些人无视了国际旅游可能会给当地环境和历史造成的灾难性的影响。
67. As for me，I'm firmly convinced that the number of foreign tourists should be limited，for the following reasons：
就我而言，我坚决地认为国外旅游者的数量应得到限制，理由如下：
68. In addition，in order to attract tourists，a lot of artificial facilities have been built，which have certain unfavorable effects on the environment.
另外，为了吸引旅游者，大量人工设施被修建，这对环境是不利的。
69. For lack of distinct culture，some places will not attract tourists any more. Consequently，the fast rise in number of foreign tourists may eventually lead to the decline of local tourism.
由于缺乏独特的文化，一些地方不再吸引旅游者。因此，国外旅游者数量的快速增加可能最终会导致当地旅游业的衰败。 70. There is a growing tendency for parents to ask their children to aept extra educational programs over the recent years.
近些年，父母要求他们的孩子承受额外的教育呈增长的势头。 71. This phenomenon has caused wide public concern in many places of world.
这一现象在全世界许多地方已引起了广泛关注。
72. Many parents believe that additional educational activities enjoy obvious advantage. By extra studies，they maintain，their children are able to obtain many kinds of practical skills and useful knowledge，which will put them in a beneficial position in the future job markets when they grow up.
许多家长相信额外的教育活动有许多优点，通过学习，他们的孩子可以获得很多实践技能和有用的知识，当他们长大后，这些对他们就业是大有好处的。
73. In the first place，extra studies bring about unhealthy impacts on physical growth of children.
Educational experts point out that，it is equally important to take some sport activities instead of extra studies when children have spent the whole day in a boring classroom. 首先，额外的学习对孩子们的身体发育是不利的。教育专家指出，孩子们在枯燥的教室里呆了一整天后，从事一些体育活动，而不是额外的学习，是非常重要的。
74. Children are undergoing fast physical development; lack of physical exercise may produce disastrous influence on their later life.
孩子们正处于身体快速发育时期，缺乏体育锻炼可能会对他们未来的生活造成严重的影响。
75. In the second place，from psychological aspect，the majority of children seem to tend to have an unfavorable attitude toward additional educational activities.
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