【题文】
假设你是新华中学高二学生李华，即将进入高三的你的朋友William感到压力很大，学习效果基微，请你给他写一封电子邮件，帮助他放松身心，提高学习效率。
内容要点
1.快乐学习，保持愉快的心情 2.积极参加体育活动，听听歌曲音乐 3.多与同学交流，互相鼓励。 注意
1.开头和结尾已经为你写好，词数100左右。 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear William.
Recently, I have heard that you feel stressed as a to-be student of Senior Three. Best wishes!
Yours. Li Hua
【答案】 Dear William.
Recently, I have heard that you feel stressed as a to-be student of Senior Three. Here is some advice on how to study effectively.
First of all, learn in a relaxing way. This will remove your pressure, making study an easy job. Another way to keep up your spirits is to take part in sports. Not only does exercise build up the body, but also it provides you time to relax and fresh your mind, making you memorize things faster and longer. Music, too, is another effective means of refreshing and it can help you concentrate better. Last but not least, you should exchange ideas with your classmates. Through the communication you can find support, which will encourage you to overcome difficulties in
your study.
Hope these can benefit you. Best wishes!
Yours. Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析：考查提纲类写作。本文要求以李华的身份给你的朋友William写一封电子邮件，帮助他放松身心，提高学习效率。文章使用第一人称和一般现在时；要点如下：1.快乐学习，保持愉快的心情；2.积极参加体育活动，听听歌曲音乐；3.多与同学交流，互相鼓励。建议文章分成两部分，第一部分为总起段落，第二部分提出具体建议。在写作的时候特别要注意不要使用中国式英语，多使用高级句式和词汇，同时句式要富有变化。 【名师点睛】
本篇范文结构合理，语言流畅地道。全文没有中国式英语句式，作者在写作的时候很注意使用串联词连接各要点，如first of all, last but not least；同时作者还使用了较多的高级句式，如定语从句which will encourage you to overcome difficulties in your study.分词做状语用法This will remove your pressure, making study an easy job.倒装句Not only does exercise build up the body, but also it provides you time to relax and fresh your mind, making you memorize things faster and longer.等等。
【标题】江西省南昌市八一中学、洪都中学等五校2015-2016学年高二5月联考英语试题 【结束】
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